Tales of Jael: Imbeciles (Critique)

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Tales of Jael: Imbeciles (Critique)

Post by Dazargeros » Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:16 am

Link to the story:
viewtopic.php?f=31&t=3787

Sooo! Did'ja like it? Did'ja not like it? Tell me all here! And don't feel like I'm gonna absolutely maul you or block you if you say something with a bit of keen truthfulness to it, I'm just trying to improve my writing and get ideas for how to continue on the story.

(Images of the characters will be posted on this shortly!)
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Your lad, one and only, abroad this endless journey.

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