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Hey Rem! Love your use of imagery throughout your work. Can't say I'm too familiar with it, but right off the back, I see some spelling errors that you might wanna check out. 'Lonlieness' is actually spelled loneliness. 'Casm' is spelled chasm. Just a head's up, nothing too serious.