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Team Zion: Heroes in the Making

Post by Yaboymiller » Mon Apr 09, 2018 1:01 pm

"Brother..." A mysteriously feint voice said in his dream. "Please, come find me. Brother save me." Mako woke from the dream sweating as he sat up in his bed looking around the room. "Who was that?" Mako asked himself. Before he knew it a pillow hit his face causing him to stop thinking about the dream.

"Go to sleep, we have school tomorrow." A boy with redish orange hair said in a tired like voice before shifting his head in the other direction.

"Your right." Mako replied before laying back on his bed.

"Hey sleepy head wake up." A voice said that sounded familiar to him.

Mako began to slowly wake up from his sleep as he heard drawers being pulled in and out. "Do you have to make so much noise in the morning Josh?" Mako snapped at the redish orange haired boy as he sat up in his bed rubbing his eyes and yawning as loud as he could.

"You wouldn't think of it as loud noise if you would wake up earlier than you usually do." Josh said as he sat on his bed putting on his socks wearing a grey and black t-shirt, and blue jeans.

"I guess your right." Mako agreed not feeling like arguing in the morning. Mako finished putting on his clothes before grabbing his backpack and heading downstairs where he saw Josh and his orphanage mother.

"Morning Mako." She greeted as she set his breakfast on the table.

"Morning." He replied as he sat In front of Josh who was chowing down on his own plate of breakfast.

"Mako we better hurry to the bus stop before we miss it like last time." Josh said as he put his dishes in the sink.

"Your right." Mako replied as he did the same thing as Josh."Later Ms. Taylor." Mako said before closing the front door and running towards the bus stop.

"I won't be at the bus stop today, because of football practice." Josh told Mako as they were waiting at the bus stop.

"Oh, okay." Mako replied as he kicked a rock into the street.

"Are you gonna be fine riding the bus yourself?" Josh asked.

"I'm eight not a kindergardener, I'll be fine." Mako replied with a little anger in his tone.

"Hey wimp." A voice said coming from behind Mako.

"What do you want Butch?" Mako asked in a annoyed tone.

"Lunch money. Now. Or do you want to be fed a knuckle sandwich to the face?" Butch asked as he grabbed Mako's collar in one hand and balled a fist in the other.

"Here take it." Mako said as he gave Butch the money. "Now please leave me alone." Mako pleaded.

"Thank you for your services, loser." Butch replied with a laugh as he walked towards the cafeteria.

"Great, now what am I supposed to do about food?" Mako whimpered as he sat at an empty table.


The end of school bell rang causing Mako to wake up from his sleep. "uh oh." Mako said as he looked at the clock on the wall. "I'm gonna be late for the bus." Mako shoved his school materials into his bag before running towards his bus which he saw driving away. "You've gotta be kidding me." Mako said in an angered tone as he threw his bag on the ground. "No choice but to walk now." Mako said as he picked up his bag off of the ground and began to walk towards his home.

"My god, this is taking forever." Mako said agitated. Before he could react Mako was pulled into an alley where he was looking at a familiar face.

"Hey wimp, whatcha doin walking all the way out here." Butch asked with an evil smirk on his face.

"I missed the bus." Mako said in a low tone hoping Butch wouldn't hear what he said.

"Your a wimp and an idiot. That's a bad combination. So how about I do you a favor a put you out of your misery." Butch said as he raised pulled his fist back ready to punch Mako.

Mako blocked his face waiting for the punch to hit him. After a couple of seconds had past he raised down his arms revealing a frozen Butch that was covered in ice. Alex looked at his hands in fear then looked at the frozen Butch. As Mako stood there he wish that he was home then just like that he appeared inside the orphanage.


"Hey Mako bout time you got here." Josh said in a joking manner.

Mako ran towards Josh hugging him as hard as he could. "What's happening to me. I froze Butch by accident, and and and everything was moving in slow motion. I'm scared Josh." He said as he continued to cry.

" Don't worry Mako, we'll figure this out together." Josh replied as he held hugged Mako.


There it is the prologue to this spectacular story. In other news I have decided to included OC's in my story. I will need a maximum of 10 to 14 OC'S depending on how the story goes and feel free to make more than one.

here is the character sheet and Mako's information

Name: Mako Wilson


Age: 16

Gender: Male

Hero, Villian, or civilian: Hero

Race(Vampire, Werewolf, Alien Species, etc.): Mutant

Powers: Ice and teleportation

Skills: profiecent at boxing, jiu jitsu, and tea kwon do, melee weapon specialist

weakness:May be unable to create ice, being limited to manipulating only from already existing sources.

Creation of ice may depend on the amount of moisture available, dry areas could make this harder or impossible.

Ice is affected by everything that normal ice would be, although the user is perfectly able to use their power to return the ice in its original shape and/or controlling it even under these forces:

Melt under extreme heat (Fire Manipulation or Magma Manipulation).

vibrations are difficult (if not impossible) to freeze, as they cause the ice to shatter, making sound-based abilities a perfect counter.

appearance: Japanese, African American, light brown skin, 6'0, muscular build, blue eyes(after powers manifested), blue buzz cut hair(after powers manifested), pentagram on his back from the demon he was born with

Personality: Shy, Intellegent, athletic, friendly once he gets to know a person

likes: girls, Japanese foods, soccer,pizza, parkour

dislikes: bullies, broccoli

hero outfit: Blue and white sleeveless shirt, fingerless gloves, blue jeans, blue sneakers, star shaped necklace

bio: raised as an orphan Mako never knew if he had any family. When Mako decided to join team Zion, he was determined to find his family that has the same star necklace as him.

love interest of Mako(yes or no):

Well I guess that's it pm me your character sheets, I'll answer any questions you have. Review and favorite. Till then live strong and stay awesome.
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Re: Team Zion: Heroes in the Making

Post by Yaboymiller » Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:08 pm

Chapter 1: A fresh start
Stretching out on top of a rooftop a boy with blue buzz cut hair and blue eyes was getting pumped for his usual run. He was somewhat muscular with light brown skin complexion and thin eyebrows. As he ran his usual route, flipping and jumping over the gaps in between the rooftops, he heard a scream in a nearby alleyway. He dashed over to the screaming, as he spotted a masked thief pulling a purse away from an old lady. He couldn't stand thieves. Just the thought of them pissed him off. He jumped off the rooftop and landed with a loud thud, causing the thief to be surprised by his appearance. Scared, he pulled out a gun towards Mako who had frozen the gun which shattered in the thief's hand. Frightened by Mako's powers, he stood frozen in place as Mako dropped kicked him, knocking him unconscious. While the fight was through happening, the old lay was looking through her purse making sure everything was in there. As she turned around, all she saw was the robber that laid on the ground and a vanished Mako who climbed back up to the rooftop and continued his run. He reached the orphanage, drenched in sweat, as he opened the door to the orphanage that lead to the kitchen and grabbed a soda from the refrigerator and finished it in seconds. Hearing talking in the living rom, Mako walked in to see two ladies sitting across from each other, one which happens to be his orphanage mother.

"Mako" His orphanage mother said as she gave him a smile. "We were just talking about you." Mrs. Johnson, the orphanage mother said. She was Mako's orphanage mother ever since he was born.

"who's been talking about me?" Mako asked confused.

Nice to meet you. I've heard many things about you." The mysterious lady said to him as she stood up.

"Do I know you?" Mako asked her.

"No you don't but I know you. Mrs. Johnson, could you give us a minute?"

"Of course" Ms. Johnson said as she walked out of the room.

"Excuse me, but who are you?" He asked.

"My name is Susan McRay." The lady replied. From what anyone could see, she was quite old. She had blonde short cut hair around all sides, brown eyes, and wrinkles around parts of her face. "And I am here because of you." She answered.

"Because of me?" He replied. intrigued by her answer he sat down to hear her out.

Yes you. I've been watching you for sometime now, and because of your abilities, I want you to join my operation." She replied.

"First off, that sounds creepy kind of creepy, and second off when you call it an 'operation' it sounds like its illegal." Mako replied. For some reason the lady looked familiar.

"Just hear me out, we call it operation Zion. We are recruiting teen heroes to take on jobs the big heroes are to busy with."

"Okay so what does that have to do with me?"

"I want you to be the team leader. I've seen how you fight, how you execute. you have potential, just not the experience." She replied as she showed him footage of himself against bad guys.

As he watched the footage he realized that he would be fighting against opponents with the same special abilities like him. "Alright I'm in." Mako said excitedly without giving it a second thought.

"Well then, welcome to the team." she said as she shook his hand. "Now then you have a few hours to pack your bags and get ready." She said as she walked out of the living room.

"Alright see you in a bit." He said as she walked out. He ran upstairs as fast as he could and opened his suitcase. He opened up every drawer he had and threw all of his belongings into his bags, excited over his soon to be new life. After what seemed like forever, he finished packing his suitcase and hearing the sound of a BMW M3 GTR. He dashed down the stairs and put his suitcase in the trunk and into the car as they drove off.

"We have a few candidates for the team lined up. For now you will be the only one staying at the HQ." She told him. "Within the next few days new recruits will be arriving, so don't be alarmed."

"Why would I be? If they come into the HQ that would mean that they were here for the team."

"Calm down, I was only kidding." she said with a slight laugh and slowed down at a broken down old house.

"Are you sure this is the right place?" He asked her. The building gave off a creepy vibe that he seemed to not like at all.

"Trust me." She said as she walked up to the building and walked right through it. Amazed at the sight he quickly walked towards the building with his suitcase and put a hand through the hologram, not realizing that it was a hologram. He pulled it back for a second before walking in. The sight was beautiful. Chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, a long hallway with doors on each side, and a giant table at the end of the hallway.

"Follow me. I'll show you a tour." McRay said as shewalked down the hallway. Sometime later after the tour. Mako told McRay goodbye and walked to his room. The room had a king sized bed, a dresser as long as the walls, a forty inch tv, and a few other necessities. "I could get use to this life." He said as he laid down on his bed.
A man on a rooftop with a camera in one hand, looked at the footage on the camera and tapped into his earpiece. "You were correct sir, we found him."
I understand that this chapter was short but the other chapters will by longer trust me. In other cases who do you think the mysterious person was and what was he doing. if you have any questions or comments feel free to write them and I will address them in the next chapter. Till next time.
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